After the third round of voting and judging, the following wordsmiths have been evicted from the competition.
Please click their names to read their Week 3 submissions. Also, read the judges feedback on their week 3 entries below.
Lauri: I really like the idea behind this story and the short punchy scenes. It needs a bit of editing to tighten things up, but this could be an excellent story.
Tendai: A fairly interesting time-travel narrative, despite the usual loop hole in these kind of stories. Unfortunately, the structure of the tale requires a lot of exposition, more telling than showing, which deprives the reader of any tensions. We could have done with more character development.
Titi: Could have been much more. Unsure of what is missing. Nice subject matter. Interesting flow. Love the use of first person narrative. Descriptive. Detailed.